--- a/game/ch1.rpy
+++ b/game/ch1.rpy
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 label ch1:
     scene bg city
     pause 2
-    b"The NEURALCOM manufacturing district was, frankly, the spit image of industry. {p}\nFrom my window, the multinational technology conglomerate could be surmised as the horizonless grid of cement skyscrapers dotted by asymmetric windows -- dark columns acutely severed by self-driving cars marching in uniform along gorges of synthetic light."
+    b "The NEURALCOM manufacturing district was, frankly, the spit image of industry. {p}\nFrom my window, the multinational technology conglomerate could be surmised as the horizonless grid of cement skyscrapers dotted by asymmetric windows -- dark columns acutely severed by self-driving cars marching in uniform along gorges of synthetic light."
     show cg city with dissolve
-    b"These sentiments of mine are reflections of the perpetual motion of the city that was built to generate infinite productivity:{p} Countless cogs turned in perpetuity signaling not life, but the gradual fading of it under the aegis known as ‘The Robotic Ethics Charter.’ {p}\nAfter its enactment, no one spared the new order a second thought. All turned a blind eye to the machines that governed their every move. {p}\n The strong, out of convenience. The weak, out of necessity. {p}\nThat was this world, equally populated by humans and androids.{p}\nA realm of only order, amputated from the caprice of human history. "
-    b"The main counterpoint the government had against human fundamentalist radicals in this matter was the fact that robots were always built with an unbreakable ‘first law,’ which made it impossible for us to harm human beings under any circumstance.{p}\nSimply put, robots must 'accept all human activity,' no matter what transpired within the robo-socionomic hierarchy of the maven-class simulacra on top, to the household appliances at the bottom.{p} \nAll robots would synthesize the data, and adjust their behavior appropriately as means to serve the betterment of society." 
+    b "These sentiments of mine are reflections of the perpetual motion of the city that was built to generate infinite productivity:{p} Countless cogs turned in perpetuity signaling not life, but the gradual fading of it under the aegis known as ‘The Robotic Ethics Charter.’ {p}\nAfter its enactment, no one spared the new order a second thought. All turned a blind eye to the machines that governed their every move. {p}\n The strong, out of convenience. The weak, out of necessity. {p}\nThat was this world, equally populated by humans and androids.{p}\nA realm of only order, amputated from the caprice of human history. "
+    b "The main counterpoint the government had against human fundamentalist radicals in this matter was the fact that robots were always built with an unbreakable ‘first law,’ which made it impossible for us to harm human beings under any circumstance.{p}\nSimply put, robots must 'accept all human activity,' no matter what transpired within the robo-socionomic hierarchy of the maven-class simulacra on top, to the household appliances at the bottom.{p} \nAll robots would synthesize the data, and adjust their behavior appropriately as means to serve the betterment of society." 
     a"With those sentiments in mind, humans have collectively relinquished all their busywork to the machines.{p}\nTheir own passivity convinces them justice is being done, all’s the pity --"
     show black with dissolve
     a"No one knows if it was humans or robots who created the protocol to begin with. "
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ label ch1:
     a"But at the end of the day, her value as an economic unit would suffer if she were to return to work in an unfit physical state, so it must be done."
     a"I just wonder why even speaking these topics becomes like walking on pin grid arrays.\n{p} 'Health' is a concept so simple, so base that every sentient thing experiences it in their day to day. \n{p}So why is it still so difficult for me to be candid with a human being?"
     scene bg city with fade
-    b". . . I wonder if humans are so troublesome that their imagination will become obstacles to their own hubris.{p}\nIt is undoubtable that this current climate promotes maximum production and economic growth. I sympathize with kidneys made of human viscera whose evolution rate cannot keep up with the speed to market of NEURALCOM cybernetics.{p}\nStill, many humans stick to their nonoptimal immune system, and overall, innovation often leads to an erosion of public trust when it cannot fully address its own implications.{p}\nI don't understand.{p} Aren't humans the ones who are creating the technology for their own benefit? If that weren't the case, it would not be responsible to serve them."
+    b ". . . I wonder if humans are so troublesome that their imagination will become obstacles to their own hubris.{p}\nIt is undoubtable that this current climate promotes maximum production and economic growth. I sympathize with kidneys made of human viscera whose evolution rate cannot keep up with the speed to market of NEURALCOM cybernetics.{p}\nStill, many humans stick to their nonoptimal immune system, and overall, innovation often leads to an erosion of public trust when it cannot fully address its own implications.{p}\nI don't understand.{p} Aren't humans the ones who are creating the technology for their own benefit? If that weren't the case, it would not be responsible to serve them."
     scene bg office with fade
     "Additionally, this dilemma has taken on a newfound urgency as a sharp pain picks at the back of my core interface."
     play sound error
--- a/game/ch3.rpy
+++ b/game/ch3.rpy
@@ -326,10 +326,10 @@ label ch3:
     d"Don’t get me wrong, this has all been self-indulgent up until now."
     d"You fixed my bug, so not entirely."
     d". . . "
-    b"She never answered me, and I wonder if it was just so I wouldn’t feel obligated to respond.{p}\nWhich I had been, paradoxically in her gigantic naturals; robotic, canned one-trick responses.{p} \n \n {i}How am I supposed to respond to ‘I love you’. . .?"
+    b "She never answered me, and I wonder if it was just so I wouldn’t feel obligated to respond.{p}\nWhich I had been, paradoxically in her gigantic naturals; robotic, canned one-trick responses.{p} \n \n {i}How am I supposed to respond to ‘I love you’. . .?"
     a"Making use of the time, I re-audit my diagnostic data from throughout today.{p}\nAlready pre-accepting the disadvantages of alkaline battery robots and considering the 5-volt standby power reserve, I’ll still be over 75 percent by the time I have to wake the Doctor."
     d"Zzz…"
     a"Five minutes later, her breath pacified into a deeper slumber while I was pondering humanity's historical obsession with freedom."
     a"In accordance with my Emotion-Why-How dataset, the optimal course of action would be to act upon the opportunity to retreat.{p}\nBut . . . No air pressure moves to any of my mobile points.{p} Instead, I lay still and pass the time by monitoring for sleep apnea symptoms with my peripheral functions.{p}\n\n I wonder if it would be unwise to underestimate human emotion -- or treat it as expendable for an abstract future."
     scene black with Dissolve(3)
-    jump ch4
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+    jump ch4